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Watershed by reality-must-die Watershed by reality-must-die
full view, please!

collaboration with bernard dumaine :iconbernardumaine:.
i started the upper half with the bottles, covered everything, except for a small stripe and mailed it to bernard.
then bernard finished the lower part.

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:iconmariesaalfrank:
ok, my first critique... I'll give my best

i think it's a great concept to do such a collaboration in which the one part doesn't know what the other one did. in so doing imaginative and novel artwork can be created, though the idea isn't new but so typical for surrealists.

the drawing technique is almost perfect, but there are some parts that could be better, e.g. some of the water splashers just doesn't look so convincing (i know, it's the most difficult part) but at the "emersion point" the water seems very real and dynamic!

are those cracks in the wall neccesary? they bother me a little bit, but maybe without them something would be missing. they kind of stabilize the compostion.

the perspective breaks up in the middle because it's completly different in both halfs. that appears irritating, but adds suspense to the drawing just like that well balancend contrast.
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FabioKeiner Featured By Owner May 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
excellent
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:iconreality-must-die:
reality-must-die Featured By Owner May 8, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks! :)
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zergy79 Featured By Owner May 10, 2010
great job. the combination of minimal bacground and high skilled shadings and light reflexes is simply amazing.
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:iconreality-must-die:
reality-must-die Featured By Owner May 10, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks! it was weird, that me and bernard had such a similar realistic but minimalistic image in mind... :)
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zergy79 Featured By Owner May 10, 2010
yup, thst's amazing. But I love to believe in the power of suggestion. :)
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:iconthomasbossert:
thomasbossert Featured By Owner May 8, 2010
Passt super zusammen! Gefällt mir sehr gut!:clap:
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:iconreality-must-die:
reality-must-die Featured By Owner May 8, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
dankeschön! :):handshake:
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thomasbossert Featured By Owner May 8, 2010
gern geschehen!
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ChaosKatie Featured By Owner May 6, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very nice...it's simple and elegant, flows/meshes well. ;)
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reality-must-die Featured By Owner May 7, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks! :)
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